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Expression Practice: Tsundere by AurelleahEverfree Expression Practice: Tsundere by AurelleahEverfree
Update: Had forgotten the scrunch somehow, added it in
Working on an expression sheet for Rescue Pony, here's the tsundere version :> 
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Critique by TheDoubleDeuced TheDoubleDeuced/critique/1491633718">Mar 15, 2017, 2:27:56 PM
When you finally accept that you're not fooling anyone anymore...

Two concepts, one image: the tsundere of japanese mediums and an OC based on the MLP character concept. While neither are your original ideas, you blend them well enough to give this character a well-presented (and cute) facial expression. Although the character herself may not be yours (It's for someone on Patreon, right?), you've put forth great effort in illustrating a detailed portrayal of her that the owner is sure to love.

Making the fur apparent and the expression even more so, the drawing technique is definitely well-developed. However, the lightly-colored stray strands of hair at the pointy parts and the back of the mane that fall outside the black outline seem somewhat out of place and disconnected from the the mane. Speaking of lightly-colored, the blush on her face is hard to see. It should be a little brighter and more visible so the everyone in the audience can see the facial expression more easily and tell that she's showing some affection rather than simply irritation.

Other than that, it's a well-made piece of art that I'm sure your supporter will love. It's undoubtedly a fine addition to your expression sheet in progress. I can't believe you have to make 25 faces.
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Bioshock140 Featured By Owner May 3, 2017
Cute!
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RabyPower00 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Student General Artist
Case to say, "u cute when u mad" X3 :XD:
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:lol:
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Ajksob Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Cute picture. Don't get the wrong idea, it's not like I like you or anything. :)
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CrystalPastelKitty Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, so cute!!!
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CloudBurst618 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Why does she look so damn cute even though she seems somewhat pissed? ;w;
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SkySketch56 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
hmmm... I really like the new muzzle shape. And the shading is nice. But I like the version better when the hair looked more realistic. And the ear looks like it's a little too far high up on the head.
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AurelleahEverfree Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
these are done quickly cause I have to do like 20 of them. I'm planning on refining the celshade though
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SkySketch56 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
ok.
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TheBipedalVisitor Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017  Student General Artist
Even when annoyed, she's adorable.
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Maxojir Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017  Student Writer
Just out of curiosity, are they all going to be in her pony form?
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AurelleahEverfree Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Probably not some of the angry ones but im not the best at changelings cause they have no fluff
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RockingComet Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
Another great drawing. I've always felt like a broken record player when I say these but it's true! I love the emotion the portrait gives off and the art style. Your art is much appreciated I'm the fandom, and don't think otherwise!
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NeverLastStanding Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017  Hobbyist
the scrunchessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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Henryseville Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
No! Your art was already diabetes-inducing, and now you draw tsundere?! I cant handle this excessive amount of cuteness!
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verolesh Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
Dammed, she's even cute when she's mad x3
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ZirathelPL Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
Awwww
Cutie <3 
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