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Cloudtop Retreat (Commission) by AurelleahEverfree Cloudtop Retreat (Commission) by AurelleahEverfree
Watching over her children of the night~~

Please don't submit this to Reddit, I'll do that myself tomorrow!

This was a commission by Lunar Fire; thanks so much for your generous support! 

Time taken: 7.5h
Sketch - 1h
Lines - 1h
Base paint - 1h
Background - 1h
Shading - 2.75h
Texturing - 1.75h

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:icongrace-of-the-muses:
I love the contrast of the textures in her skin and her hair. I also really like how you've given her a happy, care free playful sort of look. Luna is often drawn as a pretty serious person but up in the clouds in the dark of night where she belongs, you've made her seem more at home and happy. I like that. Also, her eyes are gorgeous! I'm not super sure why she's wearing red bows but it's a nice new spin and it adds an original touch of your own which is sort of what fan art is all about isn't it? I would also add that you did a good job emphasizing her as the focal point and letting the back ground fade to the distance, there's some really nice balance in the way you did it. The lighting is also done very well. She's lit from behind by the moon and from below by the cloud and you also did that very well. So all around good job :) You probably want to know what you can do better and I'm having trouble finding anything but she does seem a little too heavy for the cloud she's perched on but it is a cloud so. . . I don't know. Also, the squiggly mark on her chin can probably go, it's not bad but a smooth line might be better?
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:iconmaverickwolfzx:
Maverickwolfzx Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2016
Luna+bows= perfection.
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:iconbioshock140:
Bioshock140 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2016
Adorable!
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:iconsergiredstone10:
sergiredstone10 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2016
I would huggles kisses nuzzle that luna :3
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:iconmecha-dragon101:
Mecha-Dragon101 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016
That bow is sooo cuddleable on her :D
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:iconaurelleaheverfree:
AurelleahEverfree Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks <3
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:iconcajobif:
cajobif Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016
Lovely work
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:iconzondartul:
Zondartul Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016
Big red bows make every filly 20% cuter... more, if combined with a ponytail!
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:iconspitfire-panda:
spitfire-panda Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome job!  Luna is so cool.
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:icontemplar127:
templar127 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016
Daaawww! Cute Woona!!!!
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:iconaurelleaheverfree:
AurelleahEverfree Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
<3
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:iconsaber360:
saber360 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016
cute ^^
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:iconaurelleaheverfree:
AurelleahEverfree Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Bows are the best
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EqDBot Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016
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:iconhenryseville:
Henryseville Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016
Beautiful as always!
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:iconaurelleaheverfree:
AurelleahEverfree Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks <3
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:iconskysketch56:
SkySketch56 Featured By Owner Edited Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So cute! I love the detail in her hair, I always love how you do pony hair. It's so cool. And the ears, too.
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:iconaurelleaheverfree:
AurelleahEverfree Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconarancaytar:
Arancaytar Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016
Squee!
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:iconaurelleaheverfree:
AurelleahEverfree Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
^^
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:iconcjbronyten:
Cjbronyten Featured By Owner Edited Nov 17, 2016
Wow :la:
Luna looks really amazing :D
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:iconaurelleaheverfree:
AurelleahEverfree Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
^^
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:iconsebablackluna:
SebaBlackLuna Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing! (ear)
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:iconbearboymcg:
bearboymcg Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016   Traditional Artist
Beautiful:D
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:iconverolesh:
verolesh Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016
Fluffy moon butt, best moon butt <3 Looks super cute :3
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:iconaurelleaheverfree:
AurelleahEverfree Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Very fluff :3
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:icontigerponygirl:
TigerPonyGirl Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Luna looks stunning. And love how her tail has some signs of star spots - yeah, I noticed. Its beautiful. 
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:iconaurelleaheverfree:
AurelleahEverfree Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Glad someone noticed :P THanks!
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:iconsuperblueyoshi:
SuperBlueYoshi Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016
So cute! 
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:iconneverlaststanding:
NeverLastStanding Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Hobbyist
Those stars and moon are great!! Also love the bow, really cute hehe
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:iconbdamien:
bdamien Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
looks awesome great job :)
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NeonSpirit17 Featured By Owner Edited Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
To delete comments; there is a small icon with a pencil on the comment at the top right. If you click it then you can hide it^^
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bdamien Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ok thank
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:iconneonspirit17:
NeonSpirit17 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No prob^^
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:iconjakesnake07:
JakeSnake07 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
ALL HAIL LUNA!
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:iconsebablackluna:
SebaBlackLuna Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ear
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:iconjakesnake07:
JakeSnake07 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Dat fucking ear.
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